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Parallel Structure, Transitions, and Concision
- Identify and correct faulty parallelism in lists, paired conjunctions, and balanced sentence structures.
- Select appropriate transitional words and phrases to show logical connections between ideas without cluttering your writing.
- Apply concision strategies by eliminating redundancies, expletive constructions, nominalizations, and unnecessary passive voice while preserving meaning.
Understanding and Using Parallel Structure
Parallel structure means using the same grammatical pattern for two or more words, phrases, or clauses in a sentence. When elements perform the same role, matching their form gives your writing rhythm, balance, and clear organization. This balance enhances readability and reinforces persuasive arguments by making your points easy to follow.
Items in a list or series should have compatible grammatical roles and reasonably parallel forms, though they need not have identical structures. Items in a list should have parallel grammatical roles, but they need not all be single nouns, gerunds, or infinitive phrases. Faulty parallelism occurs when an author mixes different grammatical structures, such as combining an infinitive with a gerund in the same list. Keeping each item matched keeps the reader focused on your ideas rather than a jarring shift in grammar.
Coordinated verbs should also use parallel forms. However, their tenses may differ when the times of the actions differ. When one preposition applies to every item in a series, it may be stated once before the entire list or repeated before each item for clarity. Repeating key sentence structures across paragraphs can unify supporting points in a persuasive essay.
Common mistakes
- Mixing grammatical forms in a list, such as pairing a gerund with an infinitive phrase, which creates faulty parallelism.
- Selecting a transition that signals contrast (like 'however') when the second idea supports or adds to the first; if a transition is needed, an addition transition such as 'furthermore' or 'moreover' may fit.
- Using redundant word pairings, such as writing 'collaborate together' or 'past history,' instead of using single, precise words.
- Retaining weak expletive openings like 'there is' or wordy phrases like 'due to the fact that' instead of rewriting with direct verbs and concise terms like 'because.'
Key points
- Parallel structure uses compatible grammatical patterns for lists, coordinated verbs, and correlative pairs to enhance readability and balance.
- Faulty parallelism occurs when different grammatical forms are mixed in a single series, comparison, or mirrored clause.
- Transitions show the logical relationships between ideas, such as addition, contrast, cause-and-effect, time, examples, and summaries.
- A semicolon before a conjunctive adverb and usually a comma after it are standard when it joins two independent clauses in one sentence; other punctuation, such as an em dash, can also mark the break.
- Concision expresses ideas completely without unnecessary words, eliminating redundancies like 'end result' and wordy phrases like 'in order to.'
- Replacing expletive constructions, nominalizations, unnecessary qualifiers, and passive voice with direct verbs makes writing shorter and clearer.
- Editing for concision must never remove essential facts, nuances, or clarifying evidence needed to support an argument.
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